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Oh my... this drawing shows, how lazy I am sometimes. I asked the model, Rachel Oliver, back in 2007 if I could do a drawing of her, and she agreed. I started the drawing in january 2008, and hell knows what happened... why I haven't finished it then. Well, after I was looking through some older stuff of mine, I saw this unfinished piece... so I had to finish it. It this is what came of it last weekend.

Hope you all like it.

Original size: 55x75cm (22x30")
Technique: pencil
Time: a weekend plus ?

Critiques


:iconthinking-cursive:
Sorry but this will be in german :P

Mir gefällt wie immer der Kontrast, wie du dir denken kannst :) Die Schattierung ist dir hier gut gelungen und auch der Duktus stimmt selbst bei meist kritischen Stellen (jedenfalls soweit ich das beim Scan beurteilen kann). Den Schein einer Überbelichtung hast du durch die wirklich sanften verläufe gut überdeckt und man hat nicht das gefühl die Dame hat Löcher im Körper.

Bei den Haaren sieht das wiederum anders aus. Ich kenne das Problem selbst und verliere leider zu oft die Geduld dabei... Die Haare könnten etwas lockerer wirken, vielleicht hättest du sie ein wenig leichter fallen lassen sollen. Hier wirken Sie etwas strähnig und massiv. Auch scheint die Hand etwas klobig, aber das kann ehrlich gesagt auch so sein weil das Model klobige Hände hat, kann ich ja schlecht beurteilen :)

Bei den Stiefeln hast du dich mal wieder selbst übertroffen. Solche Oberflächen hast du einfach drauf :)

Alles in allem ein starkes Stück arbeit und ein echter Hingucker!
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:iconmishkaa93:
the body looks great, but maybe you should look over the face a little more, she seems to have fangs, and is lacking some depth somewhere in her nose to jaw area.

maybe its just me since i didnt see the picture =/

but great work as always. :hug:
:icondiri:
yeah, I know what you mean. That is something that bothers me, too... but since I drew that face almost two years ago, I was afraid to draw over it... but mybe I'll try anyway...


thanks :hug:

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:iconlordofvenus:
I wouldn't take my socks into my mouth. Bloody health hazard.
:iconiluvjono4eva:
its stunning but yes it does appear to look a lil unfinished
:iconmishkaa93:
oh ok, well if thats the case, maybe you should leave it, just to see how far you've come in your art. its a great piece either way.

again, great work, i cant wait to see more :glomp:
:iconknuske2:
seems to me that you've improved a lot over the past two years :)

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:iconmysteraxix:
Das sieht doch lecker aus. ;-)
:icontheloneredneck:
Amazing as always, my friend:)
Wish I had a scanner to upload some things that aren't 3 years old! I have a few I'd love you to critique.

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:icondiri:
danke :-)

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